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Wednesday, November 14, 2012




This history was made by the colavoration of seven persons, this history is a short adventure narrative story.



THE BEST FRIEND OF THE MEN




It was a sunny Sunday day of June, the birds were singing in the trees, people were walking in the large streets of London sawing the market that were every holidays. The market was full of jobs, the aroms arrived to the balcoms and get in the houses by the windows. In one of this houses, one of the biggest that were in the city, Charles get up very hungry smelling the aroms that arrived at the street. Charles was a young boy that lives with his mother, because his father died in the war and with his best friend Charly that was a dog. Charles mother that calls Mary took the door of the room, Charly started running and barking and Charles stroking the head of his dog, he went to the room to eat the breakfast.

After he had breakfast and he dressed up, like every weekend, his mum told her to go to the market to buy some vegetables and also a bit of meat or fish because they don’t have food at home. Charles asked for some money to her mum and he took to Charly with him and went to the streat. He loved to go crossing all the streets running with his dog and when he saw a stall with the food his mother had asked to him he stopped and he negotiate the prices of it. Once he bought all the food, he took the bag full of food and he took the way to go home. Because he wanted to shortcut the way to home he went in the alleys of the old part of London. The streets were empty and in silence. Suddenly Charly barked and when wanted to turn back, someone hitted he in the head so he fainted.

When he awoke from the coup, he was on a dark and scary room. He didn’t remember what had happened, he was scared. In the room were just him and a bed he had woken. Suddenly the bolt had opened and someone gave him a little bit of food and drink. After eating, he began to think why it might be there, but he didn’t find any answer. The next day, a person entered at the room and began to ask him some questions, Charles tried to recognize who might be the person that he locked, but he could not, because the person entered with a clown mask.

He passed some days in that little and scary room, but, in one of that days the door opened very softly and he realised that something was going worse, the same man came into the room and started hitting he with a wooden stick, after that the man left the room and the man that was kidnaped realise that he had a post letter next to the bed.

He dragged toward the bed, and he took the post letter as he could. When he started to read the post letter, he dropped a bead of tear of his beautiful eyes, because in the post put that if he wanted to follow alive, he would offer his dog Charly exchange his live, because if he wouldn’t do these, he would be murdered, but he didn’t want forget of his dog, because it was what he must love in the world, Charly.


In that moment he didn’t know very well what to do. He thought in all the afternoons that he had spent with Charly, he thought in the company that the dog had offered him and he also thought in how much he loved him. He had to do something, so immediately he decided to go where the sender was, with a gun in the pocket in case of that person thought on harming him. When he arrive to the direction that the letter showed, the mysterious boy was there and before he could say anything, he killed him with one shot. 

So all the tragedy finished, Charles met with Charly and they went to the house. When they arrived Charls mother hit him and she throw him to the house because Charles didn’t buy the bred. Some years later Charles and Charly become pirates in the group call “piratas el cano” and in 1492 they discovered America before Columbus. Two years later they found the biggest trasure of the wold “el dorado”, but in this discovery Charly lost two legs and Charles one eye.


 This history was made by:
Gorka Vildarraz

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